Very cool. I love how a well written haiku can capture so much. The drone in the pic and the “drone” that sometimes hums from power lines (at least in my back yard) gives that line dual meaning, too. Thanks for sharing!
You had me in the first half. Love the way you use punctuation, felt like there was an intentionally abrupt shift from natural beauty to artificial nuisance. ? Thanks for writing!
I love poetry and found your haiku to be surprising – I had to read it twice. A drone? So unexpected! And then I read your comments above. Ha! I get it! Your photo can inspire more poems!
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12 responses to “moon, light.”
What an interesting combo! …technology AND nature in haiku 🙂
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Right? when I saw the dash of the drone light in my photo, I was, all, “Oh, sh1t, that’s line three of a haiku right there”
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Very cool. I love how a well written haiku can capture so much. The drone in the pic and the “drone” that sometimes hums from power lines (at least in my back yard) gives that line dual meaning, too. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks for reading — lucky to have thoughtful readers like you
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You had me in the first half. Love the way you use punctuation, felt like there was an intentionally abrupt shift from natural beauty to artificial nuisance. ? Thanks for writing!
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Thanks so much! This video really helped me understand the power & possibilities of a haiku’s third line https://youtu.be/yUDuRwKwh8k
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The moon! Your photo sets the ambiance and your poem alights us away.
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The drone was unexpected. What a wonderful picture of the full moon.
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The drone was *totally* unexpected, lol. Glad you enjoyed it!
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I love poetry and found your haiku to be surprising – I had to read it twice. A drone? So unexpected! And then I read your comments above. Ha! I get it! Your photo can inspire more poems!
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Oh, thanks, friend — I’ve got a couple lined up inspired by photos 🙂
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I like the “fades” and “frame” alliterative connections.
Kevin
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